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Exoticland (read description)

RealFaction Author RealFaction

This is a preview of my latest song that I'm working on my new album. This is what I have so far but I would like some reviews and tips rather than you all mindlessly downloading my songs without reading the description like most of you do -_-

One last thing, STOP ZERO BOMBING! Seriously use REAL voting and maybe we would all just get along rather than trying to get to the top of the frikin charts!

EDIT: And why am I not surprised, someone does it. Well thanks for NOT reading nor giving a crap. Unlike you I actually put hours into this with my heart and soul, not like it matters to you, it's all about ratings. But seriously, I want a decent rating, not some 0.



Rated 5 / 5 stars

asking ya

does a 5/5 and a 10/10 help you out better than the zeros? if so then i guess i did my job then lol. it is a nice song and if the finished version is complete i may be one of the first ones to hear it so who knows


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Great foundation

You're off to a great start with this one. It's got a nice high lead, a good range of mids, and the lows are pure sex. That said, I do have a few criticisms and suggestions:

- Get some cymbals in there. Some hi hats, crashes, reverses, anything! Even the slightest addition of them will really fill out the beat

- Speaking of the beat, it would be nice to hear at least a little variation, particularly when you're transitioning the melodies

- I really appreciate how well the highs, mids, and lows work well with each other. A lot of artists (myself included) tend to struggle with making those ranges truly click, and you did it extremely well. However, my suggestion here would be to take your time more with the song. You've got three minutes worth of material crammed into 1:16. Maybe add some dynamic transitions, a few sounds here and there, etc. Just fill it out more.

Again, great start. Personally, I wouldn't change much about the melodies; I would just start filling in the blanks. Now that I've written a review, I can zero bomb without remorse!

Kidding. 3/5 7/10 Keep it up!


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars


Nice song you got here. It's really upbeat and enjoyable. Can't wait for the finished version.

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