Not really happy with this but eh. It was an attempt to make a logo for a friend and ended up not really being what she wanted.
It's awesome. Not bad for a newcomer artist, although the image could probably be more sharper. It looks like the large paintbrush tool option in MS Paint.
Keep practicing bud.
I do like the imagery and effects used, but perhaps you can try the same thing but make them just sharp and simple?
its still practice regardless. you can only get better.