It's not really that great, probably a fail, but I have asthma problems atm, but this is basically part of a story i wrote months ago, it hasnt been released, but i hope somehow it could become a comic or something animated. I just missed voice acting, and I did the music too. I did some pitch changes in the editing obviously, and yes I voiced a woman too for this. Don't be too harsh...I know it's not that great.
not bad. seem's like you did good on this.